In for the running for the BIG prize: Brooke, Paige, Tyler He. and Tyler Ha. Everyone keep up the good work!
Here's your question:
There is always room for improvement. What are two things the author could have done to make this book even better? Don't forget to tell me the title of your book and your first name.
8 comments:
Hi I'm Tyler the book I'm reading is called How To Get Fabulously Rich. I think the book was really good. At the end Billy won the money But they never said what he did with it. Also
I would like to know why they made the contest in the first place.
by Tyler Henderson
The name is Bethany and the book is Jigsaw Jones Mystery. The author shod
make it interesting by noting letters to the kids. Next Thing is to go fallow feet prints of the ghost
My first name is Paige and the title of the book is Jigsaw Jones the Case of the Groaning Ghost. I think that the author could make the book interesting by not letting Bobby make Kim's ghost away,what he could do is let Jigsaw figure out that the ghost is Kim's sister or even Bobby and he could of took away when Jigsaw said"Bobby took all his George Washington. To make the book better.
My name is Brooke.
The author could have said what the
shadow was, or see what was in the other room. It would of made the story a little bit more exciting. The book I'm reading is A Jigsaw Jones Mystery The Case of the Groaning Ghost By:James Preller
The first thing he could of making this book even better is Sharon could
give the secret recipe to Andrew after school. The second thing the author could make the book better is Sharon just give Andrew the secret recipe.
my name is Morganne and I'm reading a Jigsaw Jones mystery and i think he should have changed made a little more writing and made it more interesting.
A Weekend With Wendell was a very good book. The author should have made Wendell play with Sophie. The author should have made him say let's go play.
Giovanni
The title is a Jigsaw Jones Mystery.
the author could make longer sentences. He probably could make more sense.
Kayla
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